Saturday, June 6, 2015
How to: Write A Short Story
I have no idea.
But...here's how I write a short story. I think of it as cutting out the middle man. Instead of doing this -
A <-------------> B <-------------> C
you do this -
A <-------------> C
A is your start; the beginning of your story. The event/s that start the ball rolling and spur on the characters/events that lead to the ending. B is the middle. The part where you give the directions. Where you show your characters the path they have to follow and let them decide if they're going to take it or not. This part, in novels, is where all the will-they-wont-they and the action-packed adventure comes in. In a short story you don't have time for that. Which brings us to C: the ending. The part where it all comes together under the beautiful umbrella of they-did or they-didnt and boy-gets-the-girl/boy or cop-gets-bad-guy.
For me, the only way I can write a short story is to cut out B altogether. I know, everyone will tell you that the middle is the important part, but when you're limited to 10,000-15,000 words and you have this incredible story to tell you want to be able to explore it and give the characters some excitement, to put some road blocks in their way and make them work for the happy ending. You can't do that in a short story. Like I said, as far as I'm concerned you don't have time.
* I pick a story that is simple and has few characters. The more characters you have, the more difficult it is to be concise and keep it short.
* I then organise those characters into importance and their role in the story.
* I write out, in note form, how the story is going to go, in as much detail as possible. I don't always do this for a novel because I like the characters to tell me what direction they want to go, but in a short story I don't have time for that so they go where I tell them to go.
* I start writing. This is the crucial part.
* I write the entire story in one document, with only *** as a break between scenes. This doesn't divide into chapters and will go on as long as the story does. Then I check word count and if it fits, I divide it into chapters.
* The Beginning (the main event that spurs on everything else) is only allowed the cover 1 or 2 pages of the first chapter.
* 10-15,000 words is not a lot, so keep it short and to the point. Immediately delete unnecessary scenes/conversations/characters.
* The Middle (the how-they-get-there part) can take 2-3 chapters and a half.
* 10-15,000 also doesn't leave you a lot of room to move. I tend to keep my shorts to about 3-4 chapters. You can get a good 3-4,000 words in each chapter.
* The End should take either the entire/half of the last chapter or the last page. It depends if the ending leads to another scene or if it ends abruptly.
* If you have words left in your word count and there's more you want to add, use them.
* I plan to always leave the final story (before editing) about 10-20 words short of the goal, if I can. This means I have space in my word count for the title, my name and chapter headers. This varies depending on the length of the title and if I'm naming chapters anything other than 'Chapter 1'.
* If chapters have a headline, e.g. 'The Moment of Truth' then I miss out the above. Instead I add each headline as I write and then, when the story is finished, I check the word count and edit until it fits.
* Stick to 1-2 main characters.
* Tell the story from 1 POV (Point of View).
* Keep your scenes to the point. In a novel you can point out things that will be interesting or be important later, but you don't have time for that in a short story. If it's important, make sure the readers knows about it without acting stopping to say 'this character realised that this would be important.'
* Subtle does not work! You don't have time!
* You can create suspense and anticipation in a short story. It is possible, but you have to be clever about it.
* Small actions and words can have the biggest impact. Use this to your advantage.
* KNOW where your story starts and ends and how you get there. If you don't know this, you can't write it into a novel, never mind a short story.
* Focus! If you get distracted and start rambling, you're going to use up precious word count on nothing. It will be filler and your editor will cut it.
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